Hi Arif Ghazali ,

Thank you for participating and submitting your work! It's amazing

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Arif Ghazali ,

Feedback from Mike Taylor: “First of all, I appreciate your choice of background music for the title slide. It creates a welcoming atmosphere and sets a positive tone for the course.

As I proceeded to slide 3, I found the video to be interesting, but I wasn't sure about its purpose in that particular slide. I suggest that you consider making it the first slide instead of the current title slide as it could be a better way to capture the learners' attention right from the start.

While going through the course, I was looking for a menu to navigate back to a previous slide but couldn't find it. Did I miss it, or was it an intentional design choice? I recommend including a navigational menu in your course to help learners navigate through the course seamlessly.

I also noticed that you used audio narration on some slides but not others. Consistency in applying audio narration could be an improvement to the course's quality.

I appreciate the interactivity you've included, like the one on slide 6. However, it could be even better if you move the instructions up to the top or make them more noticeable. I found myself struggling a bit to notice them at first.

Unfortunately, I got stuck on slide 7 and couldn't evaluate anything beyond that point. This experience further emphasized the need for a navigational menu to allow learners to easily move between different sections of the course.

Thank you for considering my feedback. I hope you find it helpful in improving the quality of your online course."